Aet Lindling

I'm a be hard on this The diamond girl was flawless, her form and gait pristine. God made her eyes from stars and seas, and stroked his jealousy. Nice meter, ...

Hey there! Welcome to YWS! I'm not sure what I took that's yours, or whatever you wanted to share with me. I'm sorry if I ripped your heart, do you ...

Eli Freeman - Europe - 10 am HEV Power: 100 Silence. breathe in I slide through the grass, stealthy as a gazelle. breathe out I listen carefully to the quiet ...

-Romance is definitely allowed, as are sex scenes. No details, please, some people eat when they read posts. Well, some people like to multitask when eating... I mean, you can ...

If this is the kind of stuff you write when you're recovering from a high, go and find a few more joints. The wording and imagery is excellent, and there's ...

First off, the subtlety in the poem is a good thing, not a bad thing. Keep it, don't get rid of it. You shouldn't provide exposition about what the poem ...

Interesting quotes. 6/10

Safari (Mac), in case this helps anyone. May be same on Windows, although I doubt it. Click on "Safari" in the menu bar. Click on "Empty Cache...".

I feel the need to make another comment here - the purpose of vanity publishing is if you just want to print, say, twenty copies of the book for your ...

Dreamy, observe the FAQ.

Gratian's got brown hair, so that's that solved. :P (Also, not that I'm in the scene or anything, but isn't it Isaac Dawno, not Isaac Idawno?) Gratian - O-Week, 2:00 ...

This is incredible, where on earth is the next part? Need more.

That's a reference pic for why Gratian got confused here: I assume this room layout is fine, but if anyone thinks it should be changed, do point it out.

Gratian - Outdoors/Dorm A2 - 1:15 pm I gathered a couple more arrows, all but one of which on target. Placing them back in my quiver, I decided to go ...

Gratian, around the very end of the speech. (A quiver is an arrow container. It's those bags of arrows archers always have slung over their shoulder.) "...which is why we ...